We Need to Talk (Microfiction)

Tall And True microfiction on Twitter

  -18   To celebrate the introduction of 280-character Tweets by Twitter, Meanjin Quarterly ran a microfiction competition. The “@Meanjin Twiction” rules were simple, tweet a 280-character story and include the hashtag #meanjin280. The prize? The top ten stories to be published on the Meanjin Blog and the authors paid $1 a word. 

As I commented in a blog post on RobertFairhead.com, I discovered microfiction when I reviewed Loopholes by Susan McCreery, for the NSW Writers Centre.

I enjoy the challenge of the genre. There is no time for plot and character development; every word must count. The writer plunges the reader into the story and wrenches them back out, leaving it to the reader’s imagination to reflect upon what he or she has read, what lead to the situation, and how it might resolve itself.

The piece is spot on 280 characters, including the #meanjin280 tag, or just under 50 words (so that’s $50 if the @Meanjin Twiction judges like it!). And yet, as when writing longer verse, the beginning and the end came to me first, and I just had to work out how to navigate from one to the other.

We Need to Talk is published on Tall And True, but here's a copy to save you clicking on the link – I hope you (and the judges!) like it:

White walls, sweet antiseptic, tubes and wires, electronic beeps and the laboured, wheezing breath of my shrunken father.

We need to talk, soon. Not about the future or present; now we’ve only got the past.

But my phone distracts me. I wish we had more time and words!

© 2017 Robert Fairhead 
NB: Blog post also published on RobertFairhead.com.

Robert Fairhead

Robert Fairhead

Sydney, NSW, Australia.
A middle-aged dad and dog owner, Robert is the Founding Editor and a writer for Tall And True and blogs at RobertFairhead.com. He enjoys reading, writing, playing the guitar, walking his dog, and watching Aussie Rules Footy with his son. Robert has worked as an electrician, sales and marketing rep, computer programmer, dog trainer and (wanna-be) writer. He also had a one-night stand as a stand-up comic.


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